[And then just as he is perhaps starting to fall, he stops, as if upheld by some unseen force. A few feet above him, at the edge of cave opening, is a young woman. She is dressed in simple jeans and a shirt but she holds a staff in one of her hands made of wood with a rune on the top. It is undeniably something magical. Though perhaps not the same time of magic he was just using to get out of the cave.

Hawke peers down at him, clearly exerting effort preventing him from falling but doing her best to appear as though she isn't, and raises an eyebrow.]

You probably should finish climbing out. This isn't going to hold for long. Unless you're really into saving yourself at the last minute for dramatic effect.